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...and other sharp items by ~pretenduloveme:iconpretenduloveme:



We sit dangling our feet
over a cliff’s edge.
inhaling a breeze of talcum powder
                                                   …and other sharp items.

what thrill.

our shadows had grown to giants
when the sun broke its yolk into the sky,
the horizon gave birth to it.


that feeling

you cannot succumb to
a finger stroking eyelashes
unforgiving silver blade under lower lip;

that raw chewing noise
your cheek is in the way of your teeth.
no,
you’re nibbling the inside of your cheek.


and now.
I swallowed you whole
a curvaceous triangular pill
that excreted metallic taste.

yesterday had come
when today had went.
and it was as simple as learning.

learning again:
to blow bubblegum bubbles.
a sarcastic raise of an eyebrow,
we cross our ring and pinky fingers.

ecstatically real;
a firm push on the black button
sewn on the chest of cradling sweater.

We sat dangling our feet
over a cliff’s edge.
inhaled a breeze of talcum powder
                                                   …and other sharp items.
©2006-2009 ~pretenduloveme
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Inhaling a Breeze of Talcum Powder
...and other sharp items

i know. it just gets wierder and wierder as i go along.
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Spectacular <3
Love it :heart:

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ou are my sweetest downfall. :heart:
Thats freakin' cool .. I really like it. What inspired you?

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"For every moment of triumph, for every instance of beauty...many souls must be trampled"
:-o :D

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Are you looking at me or chewing a brick?
Amazing.

Its like a story,But a poem...The way you wrote it all out just completely amazed me.So unique and twisted at the same time,Its hard to describe the way I feel about this poem/story ^^ but heres one word.



Fantastic.
Awesome. 8D <3
I really like it, the humor and bitterness. :3

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I feel you in my heart
and I don't even know you
the sores on the inside of my mouth
the vitamins i take every morning
the way the days blend
the babypowder i brought to the beach

i'm really pleased you liked it, thanks (:

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thank you so much :hug:

it was wierd writing this i can tell you that much. it kept on turning and changing and is bizarre. kind of reflects the changes happening in my head? :confused:
i must be crazy :spin:

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i'm pleased you caught that contrast in the poem
thanks :hug: hugasaurus

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Naw ^^ you arent crazy,Its just so...I dont wanna sound cheezee,Its deap..It makes you think and it latches onto your brain,Makes you think about it for hours maybe even days,your story/poems are just so meaningful :heart:


No problem ^^ :glomp:

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